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jedibuttercupPG-15; Firefly crossover. Mal recieves a mysterious package, leading the crew of Serenity on a voyage of discovery. Into every generation...
(Book's Legacy 3: Awful Lonely)
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(Book's Legacy 3: Awful Lonely)
As of October 17, 2006, this story has been rewritten, added to, and moved to a separate community. Link above goes to new location. Story index is here.
(Originally x-posted to
joss100 and afterserenity)
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Date: 2005-10-30 05:53 am (UTC)Thank you
Date: 2005-11-04 11:31 pm (UTC)Thank you; I appreciate the feedback. I'll be posting at least one chapter a week, two if I can; it won't be a WIP forever. =)
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Date: 2005-10-30 09:39 am (UTC)Feedback - BL #4
Date: 2005-11-04 11:33 pm (UTC)*blushing* Thank you! I hope you continue to feel that way as the story progresses.
> The melding of the Watcher lore with the newly terraformed worlds is seamless and makes terrifying sense.
I'm doing my hardest to keep this consistent with FF-verse rules instead of Buffy ones, but the Slayer idea stuck with me too much not to use the concept. =)
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Date: 2005-10-30 11:08 am (UTC)I'm still intrigued to hear more in his head about what he feels with regards to the issue of the slayers. Should be much fun.
Poor River, I was wondering when someone would notice she's all by her lonesome. She's crew now, so she should get the fifth bunk. Love it, love it.
When can we have chapter five?
Feedback - BL #4
Date: 2005-11-04 11:34 pm (UTC)I'll be getting there soon enough. =)
> When can we have chapter five?
How 'bout now? *grin* Click Here.
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Date: 2005-10-30 12:33 pm (UTC)The characterisation is still perfect. And, last note:
"I am a bad man,"
Oh, yes, you are, Mal!!!! *melts*
Feedback - BL #4
Date: 2005-11-04 11:38 pm (UTC)Shhh, so am I. Though I suppose if you read the exhaustive essay I posted a couple of days ago on the topic, it's not such a secret!
> And, last note: "I am a bad man," Oh, yes, you are, Mal!!!! *melts*
*grin* If I admitted to having TV boyfriends, his name would be at the top of the list.
Re: Feedback - BL #4
Date: 2005-12-30 01:00 am (UTC)Also, I forgot to mention that Mal's ritual of putting everyone to bed is SO MOTHERFUCKING CUTE. He's like the father figure ... but not quite, as he's a bit too sexy for that role. Just like on the show.
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Date: 2005-10-30 07:44 pm (UTC)Keep going with this. Because, as always, I am hooked quite thoroughly.
Feedback - BL #4
Date: 2005-11-04 11:39 pm (UTC)Ooh, lovely feedback. Thank you for reading; I hope you continue to enjoy.
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Date: 2005-11-16 05:44 am (UTC)*giggles* I can just picture Mal's face when he discovers River on his bed!
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Date: 2005-12-30 12:58 am (UTC)I thought Mal said he'd never use Inara's contacts to fence the lassiter. And yet! (I can really see him doing it if he had to, which it seemed like he did.)
I've seen "if'n" before, but I can't remember ever hearing it in canon. Is it? Or is it just so appropriately Western-sounding?
Well done again. :D
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Date: 2006-01-14 02:33 am (UTC)Besides a man that uses t'other would so use if'n.
Sid
Is my redneck roots showin'?
(yeah, a grammatical nightmare, but so true to the language of my ancestors.
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Date: 2006-01-14 04:13 am (UTC)And maybe your roots are showing, but in the Firefly 'verse we respect you for being a redneck 'cause it helps us with dialogue. :D
LOL
Date: 2006-01-14 06:19 am (UTC)I have to say that I turned a friend into a Firefly fan last week...made her watch the entire series and the movie, too, well she is from LA, California and everytime they said anything in country speak she would just scrunch up her face and look at me to translate...
I tend to think she was makin' fun of me.
Having had way too much coffee and it being...dear god...it is almost 6:30a.m. and I ain't had a lick o' sleep.
So I will shut my gorram mouth and say...nighty night don't let the bed bugs bite.
Sid
"I am a bad man," he said.
Date: 2006-01-14 02:28 am (UTC)Oh, yes you are Malcolm Reynolds, but we love ya thata way!
Great story so far... can I ask what yer pairing is gonna end up as...I tend more toward Mal and River but would just like a little warning if this is gonna be a Mal/Inara thing.
Thanks
Sid
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