I do so love your Mal. I find him so richly portrayed as he was in the series and movie, and having his inner monologue to boot makes him that much more love/hatable.

I'm still intrigued to hear more in his head about what he feels with regards to the issue of the slayers. Should be much fun.

Poor River, I was wondering when someone would notice she's all by her lonesome. She's crew now, so she should get the fifth bunk. Love it, love it.

When can we have chapter five?