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No, that's not a distraction.

I like it, don't worry.

The main thing that bothers me is that... even though the divide between the top part and the bottom part is nice and dramatic, it also gives the image as a whole a lack of unity. I'm not entirely sure what to do to fix it. A few different things I'd try:

1. Remove the girl with her hands on her hips altogether - her position emphasizes the idea that the top part and the bottom part are disjoint.
2. Move the girl with her hands on her hips down so that she starts at the bottom and overlaps both parts. That may or may not work.
3. Put a border around the whole thing.